By Rachel Raine
Courtney and Jordan were the perfect high school sweethearts. “Were” being the key word. An unlikely couple, they ended up defeating the odds, for a short time. Going to college together seemed like the perfect plan. Before they broke up. After falling out of love, these once inseparable teens now have to travel from Florida to Massachusetts for college orientation. Together. In one car.
Jordan broke up with Courtney. This blind romance ended with Jordan having a new Internet girl. Or did he? As the story unfolds, the secrets unearth themselves. Jordan’s secrets hold the keys to why they broke up, and the real reasons they can never be together again.
This novel started out like a confusing rollercoaster. There are three types of chapters. There are: the before, the trip, and after. They are told from the perspectives of either Jordan or Courtney. At the beginning of the chapter it says the time frame, as well as, whose perspective it is told from. The time traveling aspect of this novel and the switching of perspective had me lost for a while, until I caught on… about halfway through. Problem number one. Also, I found myself feeling too old to be reading this novel. Although it is centered around a group of kids going to college, it has very juvenile language and references. I had never seen the words myspace and chat room so many times in a novel I was reading. Problem number two.
But not to say this novel was all-bad. I found myself laughing, feeling sorry for some of the characters, and rooting for them in the end. Courtney and Jordan are both very likable characters. And although they are on different sides, you want both of them to succeed.
They only problem with the characters is that you didn’t get to know them on a very deep level. It was purely a façade that you got to see. I like characters to be multi-faceted, highly complex beings. In this story, Courtney and Jordan are the two characters you get to know the most about, and you don’t even get to know them that well. It was a little depressing to me how shallow they came off as. The other secondary characters were even less important to the story. Brian Joseph Cartwright, known as B.J., Jordan’s best friend was just there for the laughs. He was an extremely shallow character that only wanted attention, and came off as funny a few times.
The bulk of this story is argumentation between Jordan and Courtney and the plot follows a very set-in-stone path. It was easy for me to figure out what was going to happen next. I am not a believer in the fact that all young adult literature has shallow plots and characters, but this story seemed to live up to the false expectations that many critics would have. This came as a sad news to me, because since this class has started, I have fallen in love with young adult l iterature and I want to read some books that can be life changing novels in my eyes. This stuck out as a poor representation of what young adult literature should be.
Overall,
this story was a disappointment to me. I was hoping this was going to be a fun
read that I read relatively quickly. I was hoping to find some significant
themes or maybe some symbolism throughout this book. I found the opposite to be
true. I was finding excuses to not read my book and always ended up thinking
about other things while reading this. It wasn’t a bad story that I wouldn’t
recommend to anyone. It was a story perfect for pre-teens that are looking for
something fun. There are many references in this book that I would probably
have laughed at if I was younger. I would recommend this as an outside reading
assignment or a summer book if I was a teacher. I wouldn’t teach this book in
the classroom. There are no significant themes or morals that could be
incorporated into a school setting. There aren’t any important conversations
that you could facilitate with this book. This book is purely for fun.