By Alison Van Woert
Introduction
What Jamie Saw by Carolyn Coman follows the experiences of Jamie, a third grade boy, after his mother leaves his abusive step father, Van, with Jamie and Nin, Jamie’s baby half-sister, and starts a life away from Van. The story is told in a limited third person narrative that reflects Jamie’s experiences and thought without transforming into a first person narrative.
Novel Summary
The writing at the very beginning of the book is jarring, simplistic, and repetitive. At first glance, it is easy to jump to the conclusion that it is just poor writing, but after reading further the reader begins to realize it is a technique that Carolyn Coman uses wonderfully to reflect the jarring, and confusing experience that Jamie has just endured. This young adult novel starts off with Nin, Jamie’s little sister, being thrown across the room by Van and although it is not explicitly stated, it is implied that Van throws Nin because she was crying continuously in the middle of the night. Thankfully Jamie’s mom, Patty, caught Nin before she was hurt. The novel’s narrator describes it “as if she’d [Patty] been waiting her whole life to appear at that moment, exactly in that place to raise up her arms and catch her flying baby” (Coman, 9). And it is in this moment, presumably, that Patty decides she needs to leave Van, for her children’s sake.
Patty takes Jamie and Nin to the car, and makes several trips back into Van’s house to grab some necessities, such as blankets, pillows, clothes, and Jamie’s prized magic book and supplies. And each time Patty walks into the house, Jamie worries that she will not return, even though he saw that Van had hung his head and shoulders, like he was defeated. Even though Jamie knew “He wasn’t going to hurt anyone [tonight]. He was done with that” (Coman, 15).
After this, Patty drives to her close friend, Earl’s house and stays there for the rest of the night, and the next day. Jamie likes Earl, and occasionally fantasizes that Earl is his father even though he knows Earl is not. Jamie does not know who his father is, although it sounds like Patty might know since Jamie got a United States map from his father for one of his birthdays. At Earl’s place, Jamie begins to relax and Patty does her best to make him and Nin feel as comfortable and calm as possible, a trend that continues throughout the whole novel.
After Earl gets off of work on the afternoon after the incident with Van, he takes Patty, Jamie, and Nin to a tiny old trailer in the middle of the woods and tells Patty that she can have the place, although he sounds nervous about how unprotected Patty is in the middle of nowhere. Patty insists that it is the best place and thanks Earl profusely.
After Earl leaves, Patty gets the children settled in. She fixes up a drawer for Nin, because the crib is back at Van’s place, lets Jamie sleep on the only bed, a small twin, and settles herself into the reclining chair.
The next day, Patty wakes Jamie up to go to school, and even though Jamie likes his teacher this year, and enjoys school, he wants to stay in the trailer. Patty, who does not seem to have the heart to make Jamie go and seems hesitant to leave herself, calls in sick to work and tells Jamie he can stay. This pattern continues for a few weeks. During this time, Jamie scouts out the places he and Nin can hide in the small trailer, incase Van shows up, and is angry.
Eventually, Jamie asks Patty if they can go to the winter carnival. Patty initially says no because they are too poor, but she later decides to take him. She leaves Nin with Van’s mother, who does not communicate with Van anymore, and she and Jamie go to the carnival to have a marvelous time. When they get there, Jamie is so excited that he plays the first game he sees, the ring toss. At the carnival, Patty and Jamie are able to get away from all their problems and fully enjoy themselves until they go to leave and think they see Van. Patty quickly grabs Jamie by the arm and crouches next to the snow cone cart in an attempt to hide. Fortunately, the man they saw was not Van, but many of the snow cone customers noticed Patty’s strange behavior, including Mrs. Desrochers, Jamie's teacher. They return home, but Patty acts strange and snaps at Jamie. This angers Jamie and he winds up kicking the drawer that Nin is asleep in. He hopes it will go in and hide her like he imagined, but it only wakes her up. Patty yells at Jamie for this, but Jamie runs to the bathroom and pukes everything up from the carnival. Patty runs to comfort him, and assures him that they are just scared, and everything is alright. This is the first substantial sign the reader gets that Jamie has some anger problems, probably as a result of the abusive house he had once lived in.
After Jamie, Patty, and Nin had hid out in the trailer for several weeks, entertained by Jamie’s magic tricks, Mrs. Desrochers shows up to ask about Jamie. Jamie resents the fact that Mrs. Desrochers is there because he feels she is running the sanctity of their trailer because she wants him to go to school. Frustrated, Jamie begins turning the volume up really loud on the TV, in an attempt to act out, but he tries to listen because Mrs. Desrochers is saying “Jamie needs to go to school if I’m going to find a way in” (Coman, 82). The reader never fully finds out what she means by this, but it is implied that the teacher is trying to find a way to help Jamie, possibly with his anger problems. Eventually Patty makes Jamie go outside so that she and Mrs. Desrochers can talk. Once outside, Jamie begins running. He runs and runs and runs until he winds up running into his mother, who he did not recognize at first. Once Jamie calms down, Mrs. Desrochers tells him that he will stay with her on Wednesday afternoons so that his mother can go to a meeting. It is never said what the meeting is, because Jamie is never told what kind of meeting it is, but Mrs. Desrocher’s comments imply that it may be a meeting for women who have been abused.
During Christmas break, Earl takes Jamie ices skating for the first time. Excited, Jamie puts on the skates and steps out onto the ice, where he proceeds to fall instantly. Earl helps teach Jamie how to skate by holding him up for a while and giving him tips to improve. Eventually, Jamie is able to skate on his own. Jamie loves it. Through skating, he felt like he had power. He had power over how he moved and what he did. He even had power over falling, because it was his fault that he fell, no one had made him.
~SPOILER ALERT~
The climax of the novel comes in the last chapter, when Van suddenly shows up at the trailer on Christmas Eve. Jamie sees Van’s car pull up and he quickly hides Nin, careful not to wake her up incase she would start crying and make Van mad. Then he attempts to hide (Patty had left to go to the store.) Even though no one answers the door, Van walks in. Afraid that he will find Nin, Jamie comes out of hiding to tell him that Patty wasn’t there. Eventually Jamie see’s Patty’s coming up the driveway and he attempts to distract Van, so that his mom will have a chance to escape, a chance to turn around and leave. But Patty runs inside the trailer and stands between Jamie and Van. After Jamie assures Patty that Nin is alright and she was only hiding, Patty stands glaring at Van. Sensing he is not welcome, Van decides he should go, but promises to come back later, but Patty, finally able to face Van, strongly tells him not to come back again.
Conclusion – Using this novel in the Classroom
This novel would be a great book for students with lower reading levels because the writing is purposefully simplistic, while still using rare words to help expand vocabulary, and creating an intriguing story line. Although, this book would be a great quick read for students with higher reading levels as well, since the characters seem developed well enough and the point of view is unusual.
Another benefit of this book is that it not only provides readers with a unique perspective on the after effects of abuse, but it makes the reader think twice about the kids they know who act out, even violently. At one point Jamie mentions that his past teacher had told him he was bad a lot. What that teacher may not have known is that Jamie was acting out because he was witnessing abuse, or being abused at home. This traumatic experience was causing him to act out similarly in an attempt to get back some of the power that had been striped away by Van. However, his new teacher did not automatically assume that Jamie was a bad kid. Instead, she did what she could to help Jamie be better. She paid attention and was able to reach Jamie a little, although it is unknown how big of an impact she had on Jamie. She was still an adult that Jamie could rely on in an unstable situation.
The book also challenged assumptions that people tend to make about single mothers, especially when they are in a situation that is not best for the children. Rather than showing Patty as a bad mother for staying with Van as long as she did and allowing her children to be abused, it shows Patty as a caring mother that lives her life for her children. The whole time, Patty tries to do what is best for her children. She leaves Van when he gets violent toward their daughter. She instantly removes the children from danger by placing them in the car but makes several trips back into Van’s house to get things for her children, including favorite toys. Patty finds a way to take Jamie to the school’s winter carnival even though they are poor. And she sends Jamie back to school even though she is afraid. Time and time again, Patty places the children above herself, which shows that she does her best to provide what she can for her children.
However, my biggest critique for this novel is that I’m not sure a character like Van would have left so easily at the end, since it seemed as if the abuse was not a one time incident. The resolution seemed to happen to quickly and easily. As if the author got to page 112 and realized she had a 126 page limit.
Overall, this is a good novel to have in your classroom because it can provide students with a new point of view on a tough, real life situation. This book could even be beneficial to those who have experience abuse because it explains some of the feelings they may have from a third grader’s perspective, and it provides them with some constructive outlets, such as physical activity, that will allow them to gain back some of that power while they are trying to heal.